For Magpie 169
Gold,
the wind plucks at petals
sways the grass
and dandelion seeds
green and gold and light as air.
The world is summer sunlight
but fading,
like alpine glow
sunset
not tinged red or fire
just gold.
The house gleams
so tall above the golden green grasses
just a house to some,
but to me,
a sun bright haven
soft and warm as a mother's heart
reaching so far above my hopes
a butter gold
a sparking gold
a lantern's flicker waver gold
but steadier
as sweet as honey-gold
for it is golden- oh how bright!
It is my home
Both striking and tender; very well written.
ReplyDeletea lantern's flicker waver gold
ReplyDeleteI can see it! lol
Very nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThe home you describe sounds like perfection ... safe, warm and yes, a haven.
ReplyDeleteThis is gorgeous and I kept thinking golden too when looking at this, the house has such a peculiar radiance. Wonderful poem!
ReplyDeleteOh, how lovely! Well done.
ReplyDelete...a real haven indeed... i love your take... smiles...
ReplyDeleteA bright haven, indeed...wonderful...
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